After the Fall

Highbrass posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 11:35am

well that didn't end the way I thought it would. Still liked it though. Keep up the entertaining work.

Darkdannyb posted a comment on Monday 27th August 2007 3:00am

howdy,

i love the start of this story may i ask how and when your gonna continue it its two good to simply let it fall to the way side.

Will hermonie get back on friendly terms with harry?

please continue

tjroelse posted a comment on Friday 3rd August 2007 1:05pm

I like where I think this story is going, however is it going to be finished?

Lincos posted a comment on Tuesday 26th June 2007 11:49pm

Hello,

I like this chapter and where it is going. I hope you start getting back into writing this again.

good work.

-L-

Annette Freisinger posted a comment on Friday 22nd June 2007 1:37am

Cool Story . Harry has really grown up, and is taking the responsibility that he didn't really want.

Dragon63 posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 3:31am

I've always liked the Deryni books and I am happy to see some of their flavor being incorporated into a Harry fanfic.

I just barely started this story and read the beginning verses where Harry and Moldywart create the battle circle a la Kelson and Clarissa(? the Marduk's daughter, I think that's her name), and had to comment... now back to the story!

gadriam posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 12:50am

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That was bloody intense.
I groaned a bit at those verses, but it made sense in the long run.
This Harry is so beyond my expectations. Hell, i wish i would have the sheer testicular fortitude to act like that in his position. Do, please do continue.

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hptrump posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 11:48am

So is Harry married to this four wonderful ladies?

morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 1:09pm

Wow! Excellent start!
What a power-packed story. I will be following this with baited breath.
Fabulous job.

starlightgaze posted a comment on Friday 11th May 2007 12:42am

i didnt c ne diiference between harry and voldie(except that voldie killed and harry was a little more fairer)..

Rictor posted a comment on Thursday 10th May 2007 11:48am

Great Story....PLZ review

Cynthia1850 posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 10:14pm

Oops, my bad. You didn't say it was complete but it has been since 2005?

Cynthia1850 posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 10:12pm

-----a-----? I guess I'm with the other reviewers in asking is there going to be more. Of course not or you wouldn't have said it was complete...however, what a cliff hanger you left us. Very good story but it would have been interesting to find out just exactly how "worse" it would get, what would happen to Draco and Narcissa. I'm surprised you had her act the way she did and I think Harry had a trick up his sleeve and then there's Draco. His getting mad and leaving like that didn't match up with "my" image of his being worried for his mother...but that's just me. I only wish there was more. Interesting and it makes me have to think of the possibilities on my own...ouch. [smiling]

saphira posted a comment on Thursday 26th April 2007 1:33pm

is there anymore

Papa MidNite posted a comment on Saturday 14th April 2007 2:21am

A great story, i'd like to see where it goes

Cale posted a comment on Wednesday 4th April 2007 10:56pm

Will there be a follow up? More to come? If so, please update soon.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 16th February 2007 11:01pm

an impressive story here, and hoping that there might be more of it in the future. Really enjoying this take charge Harry, as well as what might happen with the Black sisters, and how this might vchange the way that he and the girls get along in the future, considering Hermione's reaction.

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