Meghan posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 8:31am

wicked! i like this very much!

Steven Augart posted a comment on Tuesday 20th September 2005 9:59am

This is quite a good story. I am curious to see if it will go on; however, it poses a pretty good story just as it is, too.

sylvain pelletier posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2005 6:41am

Darker and heavier atmosphere

It reminds me a little of a story I read a while ago, from Edmon M Hamilton (don't know the title in English). John Gordon, the lover of the queen of Fomalhaut (I think) questioned the queen in public, and it turned bad between them for a while, until he left for a heroic/suicidal trip across the galaxy. I just hope Hermione won't do anything foolish.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2005 8:59am

WOW! This is fantastic! I hope there's more of it coming, and soon!

Cheers,
Michelle

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Saturday 20th August 2005 11:40pm

Cool plotline. I hope to see this story continued some time soon.

Steven Augart posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2005 10:24am

That's a fascinating little tale. I wonder if there's a funny little punch line coming in the next chapter, or if things are exactly what we, the readers, assume that Hermione has assumed they are.

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Wednesday 27th July 2005 1:44am

I kile this story, but I don't know if you plan on continuing it. Nice to see Harry putting everyone in their respective places. It doesn't matter if you are Harry's best friend or mentor you are not in charge of Harry or what he does regardless of what you think or your opinion is about his actions.

Harry is incharge of all of Britain and that means that what he says goes and it is better not to question this so in the end just keep your mouth shut and go about your business.

Cypher3au posted a comment on Monday 25th July 2005 10:14pm

Very nicely done!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

len vandiveer posted a comment on Sunday 24th July 2005 11:27pm

Just when it is getting interesting, end of chapter. Sorry poor Hermione has to find out that there are shades of gray inbetween. Her mindless reaction to house elves without study first has always shown her personality fault. Of course Draco's actions between now and morning will decide his doom. He will probably either get drunk or grab valuables and try to flee.

Anon posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 11:30am

Well... thats a definit;y different harry potter. a little ruthless but cool none the less.
Keep writing

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 6:12am

Everything really changed Harry because of the war. It is time for him to choose what he wants and not listen to anyone else.

thomgriffin posted a comment on Tuesday 12th July 2005 12:16pm

Bellatrix and Narcissa as house elves? That would be hilarious! Then you would have Hermione's reaction. Think she'll be embarrassed that she misjudged Harry so? Or would she still be indignant?
I'm looking forward to more.

Chris posted a comment on Monday 11th July 2005 5:50pm

Looks like the start of a great fic. Harry cleaning up the wizarding world. Can't wait to see the changes he implements. Reminds me a little of the governments that scifi writer David Weber prefers, he usually uses a Monarch as the excutive branch of his gov with a house of nobles and one of commoners. Since the Monarch can appoint a noble they have some control but to check it the nobles get to vote on whether to accept the new noble into the house, so the monarch can't flood in his supporters.

Can't wait to see what Narcissa and Bellatrix hope to gain from this?

Harry has to be careful with the terms for this arrangement as it sets up a dangerous precedent for some type of slavery.

Is Harry with any of the other girls, Hermione, Ginny, Tonks and Elizabeth.

Who is Elizabeth and how did Harry meet her?

Are you going to go into anymore of the back story of the war. It seems that Harry has earned the respect of a number of the Order members as they didn't question his actions to much or appear as shocked as Albus. It seems that alot of people basically expected something like this to happen between Harry and Albus.

Nice work with the holding court, I especially like the Fudge punishment, he deserved it.

Hope you update this work quickly as I am eagerly anticipating more.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Monday 11th July 2005 9:06am

Well written, good grammar, no typos, concise, and easy to read dialog. I was a lot of fun.

Twilight posted a comment on Monday 11th July 2005 1:35am

Excelent start, especially like the idea of Harry becoming the supreme slord :), update soon!

Prince Charon posted a comment on Sunday 10th July 2005 2:22pm

Very, very interesting.

I hope you'll be able to update
this fic soon. Please.

TimGold posted a comment on Sunday 10th July 2005 2:36am

I like the idea very much!
Cant wait for Harry to judge Malfoy and by all means, cant wait for Harry to get into the Red-Chamber (or as you called it ^^).

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 9th July 2005 11:11pm

Talk about a *wake-up call*! Fudge and Dumbledore *both* get booted out of office, Minerva, Arthur, Percy, Amelia, and Kingsley get promotions, Wormtail (and a few other high-ranking Nibblers) get executed, while Narcissa and Bellatrix get *voluntary servitude*. Poor Hermione! She seemed to forget that the servitude was not Harry's idea, but Narcissa and Bellatrix' own.

I WANT MORE!

Wackey posted a comment on Saturday 9th July 2005 12:35pm

Thanks Dorothy.
That was a cool begining.
Hope Hermione pulls her head out and looks at what is happening to her world.

red jacobson posted a comment on Saturday 9th July 2005 10:52am

Hi; very interesting beginning; and I can't wait to see where this goes. Somehow; I doubt that Bella and Cissa are going to be overly happy with the time they spend with Harry *GRIN*

Looking forward to more

red