Targaryen posted a comment on Friday 6th August 2010 8:49am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Wow. I was really enjoying this story, right up until the massive, gaping plot hole made me unable to read it

phantombrick posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 8:24pm for In the Gardens of Avalon

OK that was a little weird. harry being accepted by Tom's mom as her child or grandchild s the case maybe. The whole story so far is great. i love the idea about being able to speak with the spirits. That was brilliant. Like i said great job now I am gonna keep reading the rest I just had to post a review of the chapter. I t actually brought tears to my eyes.


Phantombrick

neldah27 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th September 2007 12:21am for In the Gardens of Avalon

The Gardens of Avalon chapter was awesome! It was inventive, very imaginative and unique. Great story so far!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd August 2006 5:05am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Interesting idea for Avalon. My only reservation would be how easy it would be to linger there every day and never move on after someone had died because staying in contact would be so much nicer. Good use of Cedric.

MercuryBlue posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 1:20am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Planning to rename Constance to Merope? I don't know if you could pull that off, though, since her father and brother were still alive when she died.

Ishtar replied:

No, Constance Marvolo will not become Merope Gaunt.   This story was started pre-HBP and I'm not going to introduce horcruxes into it, although perhaps some characters like Scrimgeour may make it in.

MadEyes posted a comment on Saturday 7th January 2006 2:18am for In the Gardens of Avalon

You know, I love this story and all it implies. It’s quite different since Harry is given an opportunity to learn from other magical cultures. I really hope you don’t forget this story, even if I love ‘Fidelius’ just as much. The concepts of how trees are used in this story, both for protections and even as some sort of resting place left me speechless. Indeed, I would even like to use that idea to some extent in my own story, but for vastly different reasons, if you don’t mind?

In any case, the use and concepts of the protections, instead of the usual ‘wards’ was a wonderful way to employ the connotations used in cannon. After all, never have I read in the books anything about wards, but protections against this or that.

Keep of the good work. I keep up hope that this story will be updated, but I understand that priority is elsewhere at the moment.

Cheers!

- MadEyes.

Quizer posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 6:47am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Voldemort's Mum?! ... Well, that's new. I certainly haven't read THAT one before... :D
I wonder what is this Riddle legacy that Harry is going to claim, but I guess we won't see it in this story, will we? :(

well, gotta read more! You got me hooked good! :)

so long
Quizer

Kail Ceannai posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 9:29am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Well that was unexpected. Particularly that last spectre.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 2:38pm for In the Gardens of Avalon

Oh, wow!! Even Voldemort's Mummy has turned against him! This is a great fic!!!

Sydney posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2005 2:14am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Constance is a little odd, Poor harry voldemort as a DAD! 3 sets of parent's would be awfully weird

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Tuesday 4th October 2005 4:46am for In the Gardens of Avalon

Nice work. I'm suprised the Potters didn't know Sirius was dead. Good ending.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Tuesday 16th August 2005 8:46am for In the Gardens of Avalon

That was good. The whole idea and working of Avalon was inspired. The trees and slicing the apples, it makes me wish that's how things worked.

And Voldie's mom, I've never read anything like it.