Tish posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 6:45pm for The Road Not Taken

This is how you write without a beta? I am jealous. I couldn't have guessed if you hadn't pointed it out!

So far, very good. Even if it's not the one I would have chosen, it is my second choice, so I'm not bitter, no siree. I'd never thought about the problems with the short pre PS timeline before, but I like what you've done here. Great funny touches, like the hammer. And I'm not getting "TRAITOR!!" vibes of Peter.

Ken posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 11:44am for The Road Not Taken

I totally agree with your reasoning in the AN - it would make more sense for them to have a few years to develop.
some very nice plot lines starting here - thanks for taking part. I really have enjoyed the other works that you have posted, as well as your commentary on jeconais and Keith's yahoo groups.
Warmest regards
ken

Jennifer posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 11:44am for The Road Not Taken

Wow! It's much better then I could have done, even with several Beta's. I particulary like the glimpse of how the "other" half lives through Remus. And The details of the actual Fidelius Charm were great. I wonder what happened to the rock they used as a place holder for the house?

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 11:17am for The Road Not Taken

So Peter cast the spell, but apparently wanted no part of being the Secret Keeper (but got stuck with it anyway). Now I'm waiting for Chapter Two...

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 11:04am for The Road Not Taken

Great Start! Can't wait to see the next installment. Keep up the good work.