Harry Potter and the Junior Year Abroad
Professor TwoBears
By Ishtar
Reviews
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 15th September 2006 3:17pm for Professor TwoBears
OUTSTANDING STORY!!!! this story freaking rocks!!!! I love how you added another Malfoy and named him Bart is that because of the Simpsons or just because you wanted to? this story is very good and I'm glad I read Kinsfire's bio and came over and started reading this literary masterpiece... though your both very very awesome writers even if Kinsfire doesn't agree. I hope you update soon and keep up the outstanding work:):):):)
PAT MAHALA posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 12:51am for Professor TwoBears
Great store, very well writen, it looks like a long one. I hope you keep it up, well done.
Jewelle posted a comment on Thursday 31st August 2006 12:36am for Professor TwoBears
I recently found your stories on the PDA-Harry Potter Fanfiction site, it (the site) has rapidly become my favorite site. I just finished reading HP and the JYA and was hoping to see it finished. I really enjoyed your portrayal of the NA Shaman/Mage philosophy and was looking forward to seeing more of this story. I can just see us Americans being so lawless as to not have an actual ministry like the British and the shock this would cause all the Hogwarts students. I also liked how you seem to be giving Ron some credit for having a brain and the fact that he is being encouraged to step into the limelight and show his skills/accomplishments by McGonagal. I was hoping to see more of these talks between the Professors and Hermione, Ginny, and Ron. As well as the type of talk that Twobears had with Harry in this chapter. Maybe you could swing it so that Harry and crew head back to Hogwarts at the end of the school year and Harry recruits his 'war party of warriors' and they defeat Moldieshorts and then go to fix some of the problems in the ministry and Hogwarts that is occuring to them now as they experience America's Mage's education system.
Again please I'd like to see where you take this story so update soon.
sarah15 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd August 2006 8:30pm for Professor TwoBears
Please update soon this is such a good story
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 10:53pm for Professor TwoBears
Interesting error on the chapter listing. Every single chapter is listed as having zero words. You might want to fix that, though I'm not sure it's worth fixing. Just wanted to point that out.
Oh, and is there any chance we'll see an update before Christmas?
MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Sunday 9th July 2006 11:13pm for Professor TwoBears
Is this abandoned?
Neat fic. I've usually avoided Year Abroad type fics because a Mary Sue almost always pops up. Not here though, I'm glad to say. Hope you return to this fic soon.
Ishtar replied:
No, this fic is NOT abandoned. I got sidetracked by another story and underestimated how long the other would take to complete, which unfortunately leaves me with two big stories to work on (and RL kicking me in the shins). However, I am working on a new chapter and hope to have it done soon.
I'm glad you like what I've done. It was a direct response to all those Mary Sue ones where Skye Emmylou Sparklechild Black shows up at Hogwarts - I decided to turn the cliche on its head. I did include a girl with odd-colored hair and eyes, though, just so the cliche isn't totally neglected.
Patches posted a comment on Sunday 9th July 2006 11:09am for Professor TwoBears
I just checked the list of posting dates for this story. I was disappointed to see that it hasn't been updated since Sept. 15, 2005. I hope you will reconcider finishing this story. Thank you. pms
Ishtar replied:
No, this fic is NOT abandoned. I got sidetracked by another story and underestimated how long the other would take to complete, which unfortunately leaves me with two big stories to work on (and RL kicking me in the shins). However, I am working on a new chapter and hope to have it done soon.
Patches posted a comment on Sunday 9th July 2006 11:07am for Professor TwoBears
This is an excellent story. A great story line with wonderful detail. I love the way you have included the mystic flavor of the Native American Shaman history. This is a wonderful look at the world from different perspectives and from different cultures. I really hope you continue this story soon. I would love to see how it all comes out. It is really great the way Harry is interacting with the other students and teachers in America. He is finally being challenged. He is also getting different perspectives from people he thought he understood like Slytherins (Blaise).
I especially like the talk he is having with Two Bears. The fact that Two Bears is not forcing Harry to talk and is even offering to have Harry walk away without more discussion. That is really good. Thank you so much for writing. Please continue. pms
Brook Mctirre posted a comment on Thursday 8th June 2006 2:08pm for Professor TwoBears
Wow, love this story. Any chance of finishing it? It hasn't been updated in a long time and I was just wondering.
Best luck in you writings,
Brook
ThunderGod posted a comment on Tuesday 6th June 2006 1:43am for Professor TwoBears
and bang..no updates for quite a few months:{..but lots of reviews..probably saying the same thing..update..I crave my fic fix:}
Excellent story, in depth, new spells new culktures..I want more...please:}
ThunderGod
Ebbie posted a comment on Saturday 3rd June 2006 3:02am for Professor TwoBears
This is a great story. It is really interesting and I am looking forward to reading more. I love the exploration of the different cultures. It is really interesting to see how you've described native american magic. I look forward to seeing how you continue to explore this as well as the other american magical schools. Please write quickly!
sarah15 posted a comment on Friday 2nd June 2006 8:10am for Professor TwoBears
Are you going to writh more? I realy like this story.
Ricky posted a comment on Thursday 1st June 2006 2:07pm for Professor TwoBears
I just spent nearly all night reading this and thoroughly enjoyed it. Being Australian, I don't know anything much about native American magic - I am finding it facinating to read. Is there a way to be notified of updates? I don't want to miss out! Thanks for all the work that has gone into this - I certainly appreciate it :)
r
Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 12:31pm for Professor TwoBears
Please, please, don't let this one become "Abandoned". It's much too good to go into the dusbin of abandoned stories.
Dale
Rogue posted a comment on Sunday 14th May 2006 11:00am for Professor TwoBears
I think you've got some great potential started in this story. It would be a shame to see it abandoned completely.
Perhaps you'd be able to offer a look at how the others are doing with the chance to the American schools rather than just Harry's eye-view?
wesley2 posted a comment on Sunday 7th May 2006 11:22am for Professor TwoBears
great story i dont remember if i reviewed the first time i read it so i will review again. cant wait for the next chapter.
Liz Steiner posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 12:29pm for Professor TwoBears
You are a bad bad person ending a chapter like this. More please soon. I just found you today and seem to be reading most of your stuff rather quickly. Keep up the great work!
Liz
xalphardx posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 4:02am for Professor TwoBears
Most excellent, keep updating!!
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Saturday 15th April 2006 6:42am for Professor TwoBears
Awesome story so far . . . I hope harry choses the chief roll, and gathers his warband . . . I look forward to the next update
'Mione
Meri Kimura posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 5:41am for Professor TwoBears