By Ishtar
Reviews
Jiapa posted a comment on Tuesday 16th January 2007 4:34pm
*happy sigh* Bad me, reading when I should be sleeping. Good you, for writing such an enthralling story.
Of course, having read up to the last written chapter, now I want more. Is this story going to be continued?
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 9:16am
I have loved reading this story. I love most, if not all of your stories. I sincerely hope that you are once again inspired to update this story as it is very richly done. I love the new perspective that Harry, and us, is getting as well as the deeply interesting native magics that he is learning. The way you have twisted the lore of the Native Americans, of which I am one, as well as other cultural based magics is fascinating and unique.
Please beat, cajole, bribe, or seduce your muse so that you may again grace us with some more of this wonderous story.
Stanley Chalk posted a comment on Tuesday 12th December 2006 7:23am
This is an excellent story and you are hooked right from the beginning to the 20th chapter but wishing for more. So when will the next chapter come? I am waiting to see what happens next with this school and at the others. Please!!!
Smargden posted a comment on Tuesday 21st November 2006 5:26am
This was indeed a twist of higher rank.
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"That, my friend, is the enemy himself." Harry moved his hand and tapped on a name, and the picture zoomed in for a closer look. The young wizard glared out at them icily. Even then, he had that "master of all I survey" attitude, Harry noted. "Take a look at one T.M. Riddle. The future Lord Voldemort."
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Now it's to see what coms out of it
- or - horrow thought - was it the end?
/Bill
Smargden posted a comment on Friday 17th November 2006 5:44am
Hej -
quest 1 - to USA -?-
WHO are the others -
must be one of Harrys "??"
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Best regards
/Bill
Ishtar replied:
The identity of the other students is revealed in a later chapter.
Smargden posted a comment on Friday 17th November 2006 5:13am
did I miss something?
at place;
"Please note that in view of the arrangements required for this exchange program, participating students have been given a one-time release from the restrictions on the use of magic while underage. For participants in this program only, the school year is considered to have begun on August 1, and they may therefore use what magic is necessary to prepare for their journey."
It say (( August 1 ))
and if I can recall Harrys b-day have been (July 31) and after that days past - and then his days at hospital. And now it must be aug 10 - at minimum.
Tha story - Well at start it was - SLOW -,
And I see how it gow. - God plot - so far.
With things hapening in the bakground - that is good too, *cos it's like real life.
Best regards
/Bill
Ishtar replied:
Harry is getting his letter late. He should have received it the day Dudley assaulted him, but Dumbledore didn't give it to him until he was safely out of the hospital. But the August 1 date explains why the Ministry didn't go after Harry for Underage Magic.
Riven posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 2:51am
dam, this was just getting to be awsome, good build up, i hadnt even realized id read ten chapters untill i was almost all the way to chapter 20.
i really hope you update this sometime, preferably soon.
Ivy_Snowe posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 3:13pm
Okay, I'm thoroughly into your fics. This one is very fun to read. Cheers.
~Ivy
Lilredwitch posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 9:31am
This is a great fic. I really like Mr. TwoBears. I hope that you will update this story eventually.
Tanydwr posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 5:14am
Please, you have got to update this, it's such a good story!
I love the differences between the styles of schooling - although it would be nice to see something the British have in their favour, please! The white American is usually British enough generations back, so there must be some elements from Britain that are good! (Personally, I think our broadcasting system is better - nowhere near the same number of commercial breaks - and fair coverage of the government - sometimes very unflattering too!). I know the focus about what Harry's learning, but perhaps some of Hogwarts' knowledge will be more efficient or easier than that of the other schools? Obviously each one will be different - and I thoroughly approve of a lot of new stuff - like the 'Heritage' and 'Natural' Mages (I studied Biology at A-level, and often use the genetics arguments as well).
On the whole an excellent fic. I like the Vision Quest stuff (will he really have to do that trance where he gets held up by pegs through his flesh, or am I reading too much into it?). The potions lesson was fascinating, and the differences between Muggle and wizarding teachings are interesting.
Keep up the great work.
Lol, Tanydwr
reimanr06 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 5:59am
Please. Who needs to take the day off because of a rattlesnake, especially a 16 year old guy? People get into potentially dangerous situations all the time, such as the time when you accidentally almost drive your car across oncoming traffic (I was in the back seat). That seems to be a much more dangerous situation. Maybe you don't realize this, but teenagers, especially guys think they invincible. Bart should have been trying to impress the ladies (maybe not all that effectively) by reenacting the story and telling how cool harry handled it. a more realistic reaction would be "Holy shit, that was a close one! Hahaha!", especially considering the snake would probably have slithered off when the sticks were falling on it, and grown rattlesnakes arent all that dangerous to get bit by. Sure, it would hurt like a bitch, but like 2 people have actually died from rattlesnake bites in like 10 years. And they didnt have access to magic and potions and pheonix tears and the like. That and all this talk about conselling... Mr. Twobears seems to be kind of a pussy, or at least a pussy-enabler for an Sioux shaman warrior.
reimanr06 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 5:29am
Oh my. Your code of conduct is quite intriguing. The only problem is that I can't tell if it accurately reflects your personal views, or if you merely concocted them for the purpose of this story. Curious... very curious.
grendell posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:25am
whowjust reading this story for the first time and I think your onto somthing here. also I cracked up when I read "Rincewind's Luggage Emporium" i meen diskwold is great and even the name makes me giggle. keep up the great work.
Grendell
Tracey1 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th October 2006 1:53am
This has the makings of a great story. However, I've been looking for an update for over a year. Is this now an abandoned fic? What about Fidelius? I'd really like to see how both stories play out.
dwolc posted a comment on Thursday 12th October 2006 4:00am
cool chapter when are you going to update it
clmackie posted a comment on Monday 9th October 2006 2:25am
Just when I find a fic I've really enjoyed, i notice its been left un-updated since last year. If you get the chance, update this, its a great story with really good writing. Been really enjoying it and want more!
Estarfire posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd October 2006 8:40am
hey, i just wanted to say that this story is great! (although i think it has a slight drag with all the detail, but that just can't be helped without very short descriptions of your imaginings, and that would just leave your audience deprived of some really cool stuff.)the plot is fun so far, and i am eagerly awaiting the next instalment!( i really wanna see what the deuling is like, and how the boys react to "T.M. Riddle. The future Lord Voldemort") and i LOVE your characters and how they seem to LIVE the situations they are in.
thanx for sharing your story with us! - Estarfire
Meri Kimura posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 5:41am
i really like this story.... but whats with the updating??? are you going to keep writing this? or is it abandonded?
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 15th September 2006 3:17pm
OUTSTANDING STORY!!!! this story freaking rocks!!!! I love how you added another Malfoy and named him Bart is that because of the Simpsons or just because you wanted to? this story is very good and I'm glad I read Kinsfire's bio and came over and started reading this literary masterpiece... though your both very very awesome writers even if Kinsfire doesn't agree. I hope you update soon and keep up the outstanding work:):):):)
Michelle posted a comment on Tuesday 30th January 2007 11:58pm