By Ishtar
Reviews
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd August 2006 4:57am
The Marauders meeting and "Mr. Padfoot advises Mr. Prongs that this is a Marauders meeting, and therefore dignity doesn't enter into it" were simply wonderful. Now you've got me wondering regarding the "all who belong to us" line. Clearly it's going to be very important.
LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd August 2006 1:25pm
Ishy Ishy Ish, where are you? You've got some work to do now...
Yeah, okay, so it doesn't quite work. Hope you're well, and I hope your muse gets off its duff soon. :)
Meggplant posted a comment on Monday 14th August 2006 10:37am
good heavens! is this an exciting cliffie to leave us on or what?! yikes. well, here's hoping you update soonly-like, 'cause i'm completely caught up in this wonderful AU version... i would hazard to say that it's better written than the original, and you seem to be using the characters to much better advantage than JKR ever has. good on you! this is going in my favourites, and i hope to see more soon!
cheers,
xoxox
james hung posted a comment on Friday 11th August 2006 1:50pm
What a cliff hanger. Great interaction between all the characters.
james hung posted a comment on Friday 11th August 2006 12:47pm
I loved the meeting of Harry and Snape. Cannot wait for the next formal meeting
sopchoppy posted a comment on Thursday 3rd August 2006 4:34pm
Great Story I hope you continue it
mekareami posted a comment on Tuesday 25th July 2006 10:40am
I have really enjoyed your story so far :) Sorry I didn't read it in time for the voting. Good luck and I hope you reward the folks that did get a chance to vote with a new chapter soon.
Thank you for writing :)
Fate posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2006 12:27am
Brilliant Chapter!
And that was an evil cliffy!!!
Can't wait for more!!
mab posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 8:27am
I am so glad I found this story (thru painless_j rec list)!
I really enjoy your writing style, your characterizations, your settings, your plot devices, etc.
You have managed to make Peter a believeable and sympathetic char. with a plausible redemption scenario.
You have written most of the main char.s with so much more depth than I am used to reading. I love how much obvious effort you put into making situations plausible and connected.
I eagerly await more of this story!
Morange posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 3:36pm
please tell me he only poped back to the houser by elf magic? or else im going to go mad worrying about what happened to him, well madder =)
monica posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 5:56am
I am looking forward to reading the next couple of chapters. Update soon please.
gaul2000 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 7:01am
good chapter, byes
Scott M posted a comment on Tuesday 4th July 2006 1:37pm
Ooh, interesting. I wonder what repercussions the Lady Fair thing's going to have? I like the changes to the Quidditch game too. I wasn't expecting there to be another attempt on Harry during it, but I suppose that would still be the most convenient time for something 'accidental' to be arranged. At any rate, very good work, and I'm looking forward to more.
pstibbons posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 5:29pm
this is one of the two best mwpp/peetigrew fics I've seen so far. The first is theUnbroken Universe. If you can match a fraction of that (which you are more than doing so far) you will have done well.
Actually this could beat the UU.
The descrtiption of Remus' misunderstood split was good. I also liked Peter being an Equal Marauder. And yes, I caught the Seamus reference.
Vandroza posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 11:09pm
Really like this story, I like stories that take the original one and change it in some way, without just copying the old story with only one or two changes, and this one does a really good job at that! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Jadzia7667 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 5:44am
This is excellent. I hope you update soon.
lorddoom1000 posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 1:37pm
in the beginning of the chapter about the timeline you can prove that JK was just lazy about days because it gives a definative date in the second book when nearly headless nick had his 500th death day and he died in 1492 so holloween in the second year is in i992 the days are just f'ed up
evansentranced posted a comment on Thursday 22nd June 2006 11:46am
I loved Dr. M. And the "Alternate Universe" ...you've turned canon into AU. I can only be incredibly amused. Oh, and I adored the denim skirts. A brief but hilarious senario unfolded in my head as I read that line, wherein Harry declares that if the elves get to wear skirts, then he should too, and has to have the differences between male and female explained to him by house elves at the tender age of five(Isn't that how old he is right now?). This makes the fifth chapter I've burst into uncontrollable laughter. I think I may have either done too much today, or possibly not enough, because I am far too giddy to be simply reading. Oh well. Love the fic.
evansentranced posted a comment on Thursday 22nd June 2006 10:42am
I actually feel sorry for Peter. Aw...poor misguided, put upon Peter...no really. And also. You only had the house elves start speaking like the 'Big People' because you couldn't be bothered writing their annoying little dialect, could you? Just kidding, but I'd do the same thing... your story amuses me in a strange way. The oddest things make me burst out laughing. When I realized what you'd done with the house elves, I cracked up. Dobby would love Harry's place. He would thrive and burst into unnecessary tears constantly.
Ishtar replied:
I just didn't want to have Harry speaking their annoying little dialect. Can you imagine the razzing he would have gotten if he'd showed up at Hogwarts speaking fluent house-elf?
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd August 2006 6:06am